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The Lorelei Signal

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Transformations

Written by Lucy D. Ford / Artwork by Marcia Borell

When the old witch Cariyu got sick, the things she had transformed began to change back.

 

At first, it was just a few oddments here and there. Melliar laughed along with everyone else when Mayor Torlig's prized roses became butterflies and flew away. He was so proud of them, and always chased the village children out of his yard. The loss seemed almost fair.

 

When Old Man Mixom's walking stick turned into a snake and bit him, it wasn't so funny. Luckily, it wasn't a poisonous snake. Then the ever-playing harp in the Happy Lark Tavern broke a string. The beloved instrument burst with a discordant clang. Nothing was left but a broken cherry branch, hanging over the fireplace.

 

Papa laughed when Melliar's younger brother, Detrick, brought the news home. "Maybe now we'll be able to hear ourselves think in there."

 

"Papa," Melliar ventured, "these are all Cariyu's spellcraft. Maybe someone should look in on her." It was what her mother would have said, if she had still been with them.

 

"A young thing like you needn't trouble yourself with the likes of her," Papa scoffed.

 

Detrick, who always did exactly what Papa did, added his scorn. "That old hag? She can give you a look that shrivels your soul, but when has she ever done anything useful?"

 

Melliar had only seen Cariyu a few times, going about the village with her shopping. She hadn't seemed like such a hag.

 

Papa frowned when Melliar didn't agree with them. "Put your book away, girl, and bring me an ale."

 

"Me too, Mellie," Detrick added. "Hurry up with it."

 

As an obedient daughter, Melliar set aside the ledger, where she kept the family's accounts, and fetched the ale. Later that night, she got out a different book. Her mother's old journals held a lot of gossip about Yoreville's history. She read until her eyes burned, and found nothing about the witch hurting anyone without a good reason.

 

The next day, after Papa and Detrick had gone to work at the mill, Melliar sped through her chores and walked down the dell. Cariyu lived in a stone cottage surrounded by a garden of vegetables and herbs, just like any house in the town. The witch was sitting in her rocking chair, breathing hard. From the height of the weeds in the garden, it had been some time since she had enough strength to manage them.

 

Melliar helped her inside. Cobwebs draped the rafters and dust dimmed the shelves full of bottles, crocks and jars.

 

"What can I do to help?" she asked.

 

The old woman pinned her with a keen gaze. "Did your father send you over?"

 

"No, Madame Cariyu," Melliar confessed. She was afraid the old woman, so clearly ill, would send her home. But the look the witch gave her did not shrivel her soul.

 

"I believe I should like a posset," the witch said. So Melliar made one with the things Cariyu named from her shelves.

 

~ * ~

 

For the next few days, Melliar worked extra hard. First her chores and cooking at home, then the same for Cariyu, and then reading late into the night. Once Cariyu felt a little stronger, she sent Melliar to a hilltop overlooking Yoreville. A stone statue of a great black demon stood poised as if to soar down on the village. She returned to the witch and assured her there were no cracks or other signs the statue might have moved from its place.

 

"Then I can rest," Cariyu sighed. Her chin fell forward so quickly Melliar had to rescue the posset from spilling down her front.

 

Despite her care, the reverse transformations became more serious. For years, a stray cat had been hanging around the Widow Gabriette's house. She was always chasing it away with her broom. Great was the mirth and scandal when the animal suddenly turned back into her "dead" husband. The ensuing argument could be heard all down the street.

 

"A tomcat, indeed!" Detrick hooted during supper.

 

"The poor man," Melliar said, ‟and poor Gabriette.” Something awful must have happened, for Cariyu to impose such a punishment.

 

"Don't be a sourpuss," Papa quipped. He and Detrick roared with laughter.

 

Not long after that, water from the town well was clotted with strands of slimy goo. Then the church's bell tower turned from red bricks into blocks of cheese. It sagged a bit, but held firm, although the scent of cheese was nauseating on hot afternoons.

 

"This is a cruel jest," the priest sermonized. "The witch's evil has eaten her mind away."

 

Papa agreed. "It will be a glad day for Yoreville when the old hag is gone."

 

Based on her mother's journals, Melliar wasn't so sure.

 

~ * ~

 

What made the villagers take the problem seriously was when a fancy ring in the silversmith's window turned into braided grass during the night. This set off a stampede of the wealthy and well connected, all desperate to know if their gems and gold had turned back into pebbles and leaves. Some had, some hadn't, and nobody wanted to admit which had happened to their treasures.

 

Looking at the rose-less bushes and smelling the stench of sour cheese in Yoreville made Melliar wonder about the town's future. Surely they had the basics for prosperity — the river and the green fields it nourished. Still, how much of its stability was built on Cariyu's waning power? What would be left if the witch never recovered?

 

She didn't get to ask those questions. Cariyu's house now saw a parade of pouting daughters, sent by their wealthy parents to gain the witch's favor. They made small talk about parties and gowns, all while trying to make possets when they obviously hadn't the first idea how. Melliar was crowded aside, and Cariyu kept getting weaker.

 

The witch knew she was there, though. One day, when she stayed behind to clean up the mess in the kitchen, Cariyu called to her.

 

"Well, girl, wouldn't you like to turn those snobs into scarecrows?"

 

"No, Madame," Melliar answered, slightly shocked. "They don't deserve that. They're foolish, but not wicked."

 

The witch had a knowing gleam in her eye. "There's no one you'd want to pay you back? No one at all?"

 

The words made her think of Detrick, badgering her for ale as if she was a servant rather than his older sister. But she wasn't here because of him. Melliar had read up to the fourth volume of her mother's journal. The big black statue on the hill was what had her worried.

 

"No, Madame Cariyu. If you're feeling well enough, though, I wouldn't mind knowing more about how you transformed the demon Nimmikal into a statue."

 

"Oh, you've heard that story?" The witch cackled, but then she started coughing so hard that Melliar rushed to fix her posset. "Now then," she croaked, and coughed some more. "Now then, girl, listen to me. I hear that you like to read."

 

"Yes, Madame?"

 

Cariyu told Melliar how to open a hidden shelf behind the bin of firewood. A case of oiled leather held a very different book.

 

"That is an account of all my spellcraft. Take it," the witch said faintly. "Lines with dull ink are dead, as I soon will be. You need not worry about them. But if the ink shines, even a little, you must visit and make certain nothing I bound has broken free. The task is yours, along with all I have gathered here."

 

Melliar didn't really hear at first. Her eyes were on the grimoire, which was not large, but felt heavier than it should. There were straps around it with a lock, but she knew where the key was. She had found it while cleaning behind one of the crocks on the upper shelf.

 

Now she pulled it down and set it into the lock. As she turned the key, a kind of breeze trembled through the cottage. She turned to look and was sad, but not surprised, to see the old witch Cariyu slumped in her rocking chair, dead.

 

~ * ~

 

Melliar kept a vigil in the witch's cottage that night, guarding her body. She used the time to read through the grimoire. First, she looked for the paragraph about the demon Nimmikal. The ink was dull and dark. It was a relief to know that terrifying creature would never menace Yoreville again.

 

There were many other things to learn. She studied a few charms that would be useful if any would-be thieves arrived to plunder the witch's cottage. It would take her weeks, months, years to absorb the rest. She had plenty of time for that.

 

There were other matters to settle, however. The stuffy priest in Yoreville would never permit a witch to have a church funeral. Melliar laid her in the ground, a little farther down the dell. Then she returned to her father's house.

 

"Where were you all night?" Papa demanded. And Detrick complained, "We were hungry."

 

Not worried about her, Melliar noted. Thinking only of themselves. "Cariyu is dead," she explained.

 

"So what?" Detrick groused.

 

Papa was quicker to understand. "You've been studying with that witch?" he bellowed. "Get out of my house!"

 

Melliar was through being an obedient daughter. "I'm glad we agree, Papa."

 

Detrick stood with his mouth open while she collected a few belongings, most especially their mother's journals. He didn't offer to help her carry anything over to her new home in the dell.

 

Later, Melliar walked back to the church. The priest must have heard rumors. He blocked her way before she could enter the church yard.

 

"Away with you, vessel of evil!"

 

Melliar smiled pleasantly, though it infuriated him. "Shall I restore your bell tower, or do you prefer it remain a cheese?"

 

"What wicked foolishness!" he sputtered. "Who would build a tower with blocks of cheese?"

 

"Maybe they were in a hurry. I meant to ask Madame Cariyu, but I never got the chance." When he didn't move aside, she added, "I'll let you decide what you want."

 

As she walked through the town, pondering whether to deal with the polluted well or the weeds in her garden, a familiar voice called out.

 

"Mellie! Mellie, wait!"

 

She did not wait, but continued at her normal pace. Still, Detrick caught up with her.

 

"So you're the witch now," he spoke slyly. "I was thinking that you could change a bit of gold for me. It's all well and good for Papa to work in the mill, but I thought I'd open my own bake shop."

 

Melliar turned to her brother, who ignored her unless he wanted something. The church tower and well weren't the only things in Yoreville that needed a transformation.

 

"Don't call me Mellie. I am Madame Melliar." And she gave him a look fit to shrivel his soul. 

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Lucy D. Ford has published short fiction and poetry for children in such magazines as Boys’ Life, Babybug, Ladybug, Spider and Cricket Magazines. She is a past Regional Advisor for the Inland Northwest Region of S.C.B.W.I.

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